Monday, April 27, 2015

April 27, 2015 - May 1, 2015 Weekly Agenda for Contemporary Composition

Monday, April 27th: 

1st and 2nd Period: 

Review for the Performance Test for math:


Land Surveying: The art and science of planning, designing and establishing property boundaries, and the mathematical practice of  measuring the boundaries,  lengths and area of a plot of land.

Land Surveyor: A person who conducts professional land surveys by taking precise land measurements using special equipment and performing necessary mathematical calculations.

Property Taxes: A tax assessed on real estate by the local government, usually based on the value of the property and land.

Sod: a piece of earth (soil or dirt) or the layer of earth with grass and roots growing in it.

Land that is used for agriculture may be taxed at a lower rate.

Aerial: from above, from the air, a bird’s eye view

Tuesday, April 28th: 

First Period: meet in library to continue testing for Smarter Balanced 

 

Wednesday, April 29th: 

2nd Period: meet in library to continue testing for Smarter Balanced 

 

Thursday, April 30th: 

Make-up tests

Finish outstanding work for this class and turn in. 

 

Friday, May 1st: 

Finish outstanding work for this class. All outstanding work for THE BLUEST EYE and THE GREAT GATSBY will be due no later than MONDAY, MAY 4TH!

Next week begin work on the junior project!



Monday, April 20, 2015

Gatsby: How to Analyze Figurative Language





Figurative Language

The Great Gatsby, page 182:
Quotation:
“So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.“

First: identify which type of figurative language the quotation is.
In the above quotation it is definitely imagery, but it is also a metaphor!!!
(Thank  you, Kamron!!!!!)
What is being compared to what?
We are being compared to boats.
What do the boats do? Beat or go against the current.
What does the current represent?
Time. Current could also represent life, life’s struggles.
Borne means carried.
What is Fitzgerald saying about us, our struggles, about time and about life?
What is the thing we are trying to escape from? The past!
Does Fitzgerald think we can escape from the past?
Did Gatsby escape from the past?
What is the tone or attitude Fitzgerald takes in this quotation?
Serious, hopeful, determined, philosophical, contemplative, depressed, nostalgic

Connotative:
Beat: wearing oneself down with fruitless, repetitive, and exhausting action
Ceaselessly: never stopping, exhaustedly, fruitlessly
Fruitless = futile, pointless, without a positive result, a failure!!!!!!
Current: a strong flow of water, which can be difficult, if not impossible, to overcome
Borne: to be brought back, to be carried, implies a helplessness – despite one’s best efforts one is still carried back or away from one’s intended goal.

Powerful Diction (diction means word choice):
Beat, Ceaselessly, Current

What is the tone of Fitzgerald’s quotation: “So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.”

Philosophical; contemplative regarding the futility of life, of effort; serious, elevated language
Elevated Language: refers to language that is heightened, serious, eloquent, grand, expressing in a deeply eloquent, perhaps even poetical way thoughts of profound, philosophical meaning.

April 20, 2015 - April 24, 2015 Weekly Agenda for Contemporary Composition

Monday,  April 20th: 

Regular Schedule 
Work on the In-Class Scaffolded Reading Log
Work on the Figurative Language Graphic Organizer

Tuesday, April 21st: 

1st Period: 
10:30 - 12:32:
Smarter Balanced Testing today in 502

2nd Period: 
No class today due to testing schedule 

Wednesday,  April 22nd: 

1st Period: 
No class today due to testing schedule

2nd Period: 
10:30 - 12:32
Smarter Balanced Testing today in 502

Thursday, April 23rd: 

1st Period: 
10:30 - 12:32:
Smarter Balanced Testing today in 502

2nd Period: 
No class today due to testing schedule 

Friday, April 24th: 

1st Period: 
No class today due to testing schedule

2nd Period: 
10:30 - 12:32
Smarter Balanced Testing today in 502




Monday, April 13, 2015

April 13, 2015 - April 17, 2015 Weekly Agenda for 11th Grade English

Monday, April 13th:

1st Period:

Your rewritten essay and prewrite for the "Smarter Balanced" assessment is due today. 

Watch an instructive video about taking the “Smarter Balanced” assessment.
Then I will give you the rest of the sections to do for your The Great Gatsby In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts. THIS WILL BE DUE ON FRIDAY, APRIL 17TH.

Tomorrow begins three weeks of testing. The schedule will be block scheduling with three two hour classes each day.  We will meet in 502 for testing during this three week period.

Tomorrow’s schedule is:

Tuesday, April 14th:

Periods 5, 1, and 4:

Period  5              8:00 – 10:13
Nutrition             10:13 – 10:28
Period 1              10:34 – 12:32
Lunch                 12:32 -    1:02
Period 4              1:08   -     3:06

The following are the assignments for The Great Gatsby, which will be due on Friday, April 17th:

Pages 163 – 167 (Wolfsheim phone call): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language (ends on “Then a quick squawk as the connection was broken.”)
Pages 167 – 169 (Gatsby’s father): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language (Ends on “I should have known better than to call him.” )
Pages 169 (bottom of page 169) – 172 (Meeting with Wolfsheim): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language (Ends with “And my own rule is to let everything alone.”)
Pages 172 – 175 (Gatsby’s funeral): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language (Ends on “That poor son of a bitch.”)
Pages 175 – 179(Carroway speaking about the difference between the East and the West; his breakup with Jordan; and running into Tom Buchanan in New York): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language
Pages 179 – 180 (The historical promise of the American Dream; one cannot repeat the past nor can one escape the past): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language

Due on Friday, April 17th!  

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Period 2:

Your rewritten essay and pre-write for the "Smarter Balanced" Assessment is due today.

Tomorrow begins three weeks of testing. The schedule will be block scheduling with three two hour classes each day.  We will meet in 502 for testing during this three week period.

Tomorrow's schedule is:

Tuesday, April 14th, and Thursday, April 16th:

Periods 5, 1, and 4

Period  5              8:00 – 10:13
Nutrition             10:13 – 10:28
Period 1              10:34 – 12:32
Lunch                  12:32 -    1:02
Period 4               1:08   -     3:06

Wednesday, April 15th and Friday, April 17th:

Periods 6, 2, and 3

Period 6            8:00 – 10:13
Nutrition           10:13 – 10:28
Period 2            10:34 – 12:32
Lunch                12:32 – 1:02
Period 3            1:08 -  3:06

We will meet in 502 for testing during those testing days.

The following are the assignments for The Bluest Eye which will be due on Friday, April 17th:

Pages 61 – 65: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 65 – 74: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 75 – 80: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 82 – 86: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 87 – 93: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 97 – 101: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 101 – 109: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 110 – 122: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts

Pages 122 – 126: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 126 – 131: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 131 – 143 (Up to “One of these cousins interested…”): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts
Pages 143 – 151 (Up to “The fear it produced was enough”): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 151 – 161: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 161 – 163: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 164 – 173 (Up to “…the Maker had not sought his counsel.”): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 173 – 176 (Up to “….ran out of the yard, and down the walk.”): In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts

Pages 176 – 183 (Soaphead Church’s letter to God):In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 187 – 192: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 193 – 204: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts
Pages 204 – 206: In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Reading Handouts 

Tuesday, April 14th: 

First period: 
Smarter Balance Testing in 502 today!

 No 2nd period today due to special Smarter Balance Testing 


Wednesday, April 15th: 

No first period today due to special Smarter Balance Testing 

2nd Period: 
Smarter Balance Testing in 502 today! 










           

                       

Tuesday, April 07, 2015

Scaffolded Reading Model for THE GREAT GATSBY


Name:

Book: THE GREAT GATSBY

Pages: 98-112

Summary:

1.     James Gatz becomes Jay Gatsby. He meets and befriends Dan Cody, an older and very successful businessman who mentors Jay Gatsby.  Ella Kaye cheats Gatsby out of a 25,000 dollar inheritance from Dan Cody. 
2.     Gatsby meets Tom Buchanan for the first time when he and the Sloanes ride over to Gatsby’s mansion. The Sloanes are disdainful of Gatsby but Gatsby doesn’t see it. He thinks that the Sloanes really mean their dinner invitation to him, but they don’t. They think he is beneath them.
3.     Tom and Daisy go to Gatsby’s home for a party. Tom flirts with other women. Daisy is only happy talking and being with Gatsby. At the end of the party, Gatsby, unhappy, tells Nick that Daisy doesn’t understand that he wants her to tell Tom she never loved him.

Critical Thinking and Response:

1.     Why does Tom look down on Gatsby when he doesn’t know him? Tom is a very supercilious man who looks down on everybody! 
      
      He and the  Sloanes are very snobby and they think that people who work for a living and who are not born from a very long line of rich people are not their equals.

2.     Why does Ella Kaye steal $25,000 of Gatsby’s inheritance money when she already got millions from Cody?
     
       It's simple - she's greedy. 
 
3.     Why is Dan Cody so important to Gatsby and to Ella Kaye? 

He mentors Gatsby, teaching him the ropes, opening business, professional and social doors for him. Cody was important to Ella Kay because they had been lovers. It was implied that she had killed him for his money and had inherited many millions from his estate.




April 7, 2015 - April 10, 2015 Weekly Agenda for Contemporary Composition


Monday, April 6th:

No school today.

 

 

Tuesday, April 7th:


1st Period:
Passed out the Smarter Balanced Pre-Write and Essay.  Students must rewrite essay if scored under 180, and redo the Pre-Write if scored under 90.  The work must be typed and will be due no later than Monday, April 13th.
Very few students did the spring break homework.
New policy: 25 bonus points for turning work in on time.
Went over how to do the Scaffolded Reading Log.  Modeled Chapter 7 for them.
Tomorrow go over how to do the Figurative Language Handout.

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2nd Period:
Passed out the Smarter Balanced Pre-Write and Essay.  Students must rewrite essay if scored under 180, and redo the Pre-Write if scored under 90.  The work must be typed and will be due no later than Monday, April 13th.
Very few students did the spring break homework.
New policy: 25 bonus points for turning work in on time.
Students worked independently on their work – reading THE BLUEST EYE and doing the In-Class Scaffolded Reading Log and the Figurative Language Log.

Wednesday, April 8th:


Vocabulary Exercise: Vocabulary words from Chapters 6, 7, and 8 from THE GREAT GATSBY. Words, definitions and the excerpts from the book from which the vocabulary word were taken.
Fill in the blanks in the quotations with the correct vocabulary words.
Divide into tribes of three
Line up
The definitions of the vocabulary words will be read. One person from each team will mark the correct vocabulary word for the definition read.
Go over  figurative language and the figurative language graphic organizer

Read The Great Gatsby

 Do the In-Class Scaffolded Reading Log
The Figurative Language Log
“It was James Gatz who had been loafing along the beach……but it was already Jay Gatsby who borrowed a rowboat…and informed Cody that a wind might catch him and break him up in half an hour.”

James Gatz is being compared to Jay Gatsby

Analysis:
The younger, uneducated, unsophisticated, poor kid is being compared to what he intends to be in the future.  This shows the determination of the young man to be the captain of his fate and to shape who he is and who he will become.

Tone: Strong, Determined, Opportunistic, Clever, Approving

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Period 2:
Went over figurative language
Passed out hand-outs for figurative language and In-class Scaffolded Reading

Models for Quotations for Figurative Language:
Quotation: “You shut up, Bullet-head!”
Page 66
Frieda is comparing Woodrow Cain’s head to a bullet.
Claudia is narrating the incident in which Frieda screams at Woodrow Cain for bullying Pecola.  Frieda is insulting Woodrow, calling him “bullet-headed”, which implies that he is a pointy-headed idiot. (Think about the shape of a bullet with the tall pointy end.)
Tone: Contemptuous, agitated, harsh, bitter, childish, insulting.

Model for How to Do Figurative Language Work Sheet:
Quotation:
Page 111
“Restricted, as a child, as she was to the cocoon of her family’s spinning, she cultivated quiet and private pleasures.”

What is being compared to what?
Polly’s early life with her family is being compared to a cocoon.  A caterpillar spins its cocoon, which covers it in darkness and safety until it emerges later as a butterfly. (However, Polly Breedlove never emerges as a butterfly; she is forever a caterpillar.) What Morrison is saying about Polly is that during her childhood, she was protected by her family and lived a very quiet, restricted life. This is in contrast to her savage, chaotic married life with Cholly.

The tone is soothing, calm, compassionate.

Quotation:
Page 111
“During all her four years of going to school, she was enchanted by numbers and depressed by words.  She missed – without knowing what she missed – paints and crayon.”

What is being compared to what?
In this metaphor and example of imagery, Morrison is saying that Polly was obsessed with counting and keeping track of things, but missed the essence and beauty of the objects she itemized. She could count the brushes and the colors but could not appreciate the beauty of the colors Polly was restricted and limited in imagination.

The tone is ironic.

Students were assigned to do two examples of figurative language from THE BLUEST EYE from page 110 on.



Thursday, April 9th:

1st Period:
8:00 – 8:15:
Work on In-Class Scaffolded Reading and Figurative Language Handouts

Read THE GREAT GATSBY
Pages 162 – 175
Discussion

Go over figurative language

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2nd Period:
Read The Bluest Eye; pages 110 – 114
Discussion and identification of figurative language
For each section have a minimum of four examples of figurative language.

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Friday, April 10th:

 8:00 – 8:15: Work on Figurative Language and In-Class Scaffolded Reading
Finish reading THE GREAT GATSBY

 “Gatsby believed in the green light, the orgastic future that year by year recedes before us. It eluded us then, but that’s no matter – tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther…. And one fine morning -------
  And so we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.”

What is being compared to what?
We are being compared to boats.
What else is being compared to what else?
The current is the past.
What is the connotation of the phrase “And so we beat on….”
Chelsy: We don’t learn our lessons.
Jaylon: We keep trying. We won’t give up.
Unceasing effort.
If we are fighting the current, then we are fighting the past.

Meaning: We continue, with ceaseless effort, fighting against the past yet borne forever back into our inescapable past.

Tone:

Can we escape our past?
Nick: “You can’t repeat the past.”
Gatsby: “Why, of course, you can!”
Did Gatsby, the master of disguises, the creator of his persona,  completely escape his past? 

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Period 2:

Read The Bluest Eye; pages 115 – 126
Discussion
Work on the Figurative Language Handout and the In-Class Scaffolded Reading Log





Monday, April 06, 2015

In-Class Reading Scaffolded Graphic Organizer

Name:

Period: 

Date: 

Book/Reading Title: 

Pages Read:

Summary: At least three complete
sentences!

1.

2

3.

4.

5.


Critical Thinking and Response
(Minimum of Three!)

1.

2.

3.

4.

5.

In-Class Reading Scaffolding Sheet

Name: 

Period:

Date:

Book/Reading Title: 

Pages Read:

Summary: At least three complete
sentences!

1.

2

3.

4.

5.

Critical Thinking and Response
(Minimum of Three!)

1.

2.

3.

4.

5.


Thursday, April 02, 2015

The Great Gatsby Vocabulary; Chapters 6 and 7


Appalled: (adjective) struck with fear, dismay. Shocked 
Pervading: (verb) To spread throughout as in a smell or a liquid;  to permeate
Contingency: (noun) a future emergency; an event that may occur but is not likely
Proximity: (noun) nearness in space or time; nearness or closeness in a series; being close or near.
Desolate: (adjective) Devoid of inhabitants; deserted; barren; lifeless
Reveries: (noun) A state of pleasant daydreaming; to be so lost in solitary thought as to be unaware of one’s surroundings 
Dilatory: (adjective) Tending or inclined to delay or waste time.
Sensuous: (adjective) Involving gratification of the five senses: taste, touch, sight, hearing, smell
Elusive: (adjective) Not easily caught or retained. 
Tentatively: (adverb) Not fully agreed upon, indicating a lack of confidence or certainty
Genially: (adverb) In a friendly, pleasant manner
Trimalchio: a character in the Roman work of fiction, Satyricon. Trimalchio, a freed slave who  has attained great wealth through hard work, becomes well known for throwing showy and vulgar dinner parties. 
Ineffable: (adjective) Incapable of being expressed by words; too great or intense to be expressed in words. 
Turbulent: (adj.) Characterized by conflict, disorder, confusion, chaos
Ingratiate: (verb) To make someone like you by doing favors or being particularly agreeable.
Turgid: (adjective) Swollen, congested; tediously bombastic or pompous 
Madame de Maintenon: The French consort of Louis XIV who married him after the death of his first wife; a woman who takes advantage of a man for his  money.
Unsavory: (adjective) Disagreeable and unpleasant because of immorality or lack of ethics; disagreeable or unattractive to the senses.
Oblivious: (adjective) Lacking conscious awareness; unmindful 
Vigil: (noun) A period of staying awake during the time usually spent asleep, especially to keep watch or to pray. 



1. _________: filled with dread, fear, horror, distaste.
“She was ________ by West Egg, this unprecedented place that Broadway had begotten upon a Long Island fishing village - _________ by its raw vigor that chafed under the old euphemisms and by the too obtrusive fate that herded its inhabitants along a short-cut from nothing to nothing."

2. ___________: Involving gratification of the five senses
“She was in her middle thirties, and faintly stout, but she carried her surplus flesh ________ as some women can.”

3. ____________: A character in a Roman work of fiction. A former slave, this character attained great wealth due to hard work, and threw spectacular and gaudy parties for the wealthy. 
“It was  when curiosity about Gatsby was at its highest that the lights in his house failed to go on one Saturday - and, as obscurely as it had begun, his career as _______was over.” 


4. ______________: Intending to be or inclined to be slow or to waste time. 
“Nope.” After a pause, he added “sir.” in a _________, grudging way. 

5. _______________: A future emergency; an event that may happen but is not likely.
“The immediate ___________ overtook him, pulled him back from the edge of the theoretical abyss.” 

6. _______________: Barren, lifeless, crushed by grief
“ ....the woman next to me perspired delicately for a while into her white shirtwaist, and then, as her newspaper dampened under her fingers, lapsed desperately into deep heat with a desolate cry.”

7. ___________: Tediously pompous or bombastic
“The none too savory ramifications by which Ella Kaye, the newspaperwoman, played Madame de Maintenon to his weakness and sent him to sea in a yacht, were common knowledge to the ________ journalism of 1902.” 

8. ___________: To gain favor with someone by deliberate efforts such as doing favors; trying to be particularly likable to someone.” 
“For several weeks I didn’t see him or hear his voice on the phone - mostly I was in New York, trotting around with Jordan and trying to _______ myself with her senile aunt - but finally, I went over to his house one Sunday afternoon.” 

9. ___________: To spread or be diffused throughout
“There were the same people, or at least the same sort of people, the same profusion of champagne, the same many-colored, many-keyed commotion, but I felt an unpleasantness in the air, a _________ harshness that hadn’t been there before.”

10. ___________: Diffusing warmth and friendliness; in a friendly, pleasant manner
“'I read somewhere that the sun’s getting hotter every year,’ said Tom _______."

11. ____________: The region close around a person or thing; nearness in space or time.
“It occurred to me that he had been very slowly bending toward her all evening to attain this ____________ , and even while I watched I saw him stoop one ultimate degree and kiss at her cheek.” 

12. ____________:  A person, an animal or a thing such as a thought that cannot be easily caught or retained. 
“Through all he said, even through his appalling sentimentality, I was reminded of something - an _________ rhythm, a fragment of lost words, that I had heard somewhere a long time ago.”

13. ____________: To keep watch; to stay awake during a time usually spent asleep, especially to pray.
“Over the ashheaps the giant eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg’s faded eyes kept their ____.” 

14. ____________: Lacking conscious awareness of; indifferent; careless of.
“Each night he added to the pattern of his fancies until drowsiness closed down upon some vivid scene with an __________ embrace.” 

15. ____________: A state of pleasant daydreaming; a condition in which one is so absorbed in one’s thoughts, fantasies or daydreams as to be oblivious to one’s actual surroundings. 
“For a while these __________ provided an outlet for his imagination....”

16. ___________: A state of chaos, conflict, turmoil.
“But his heart was in a constant, _________ riot.” 

17. ____________ : Inexpressible; incapable of being expressed by words. Too great or intense to be expressed by words. 
“A universe of _________ gaudiness spun itself out in his brain while the clock ticked on the wash-stand and the moon soaked with wet light his tangled clothes on the floor.”

18. _____________ : Disagreeable due to immorality or lack of ethics
“The ________________ ramifications by which Ella Kaye, the newspaper woman, played ____________________ to his weakness and sent him to sea in a yacht, were common knowledge to the turgid sub-journalism of 1902.” 

19. ______________ : The French consort who married Louis the XlV after the death of his wife; a woman who takes advantage of a man for his money. 
“The ________________ ramifications by which Ella Kaye, the newspaper woman, played _________________ to his weakness and sent him to sea in a yacht, were common knowledge to the turgid sub-journalism of 1902.” 

20. ______________: Indicating hesitation, a lack of certainty
“Jordan and Tom and I got into the front seat of Gatsby’s car. Tom pushed the unfamiliar gears ________ and we shot off into the oppressive heat leaving them out of sight behind.”